Feedback again :) Please

Some of you may know that i'm currently re-arranging my Yola Finds site.
The current site is this one
www.yolafinds.yolasite.com

And this is what i have been working on
http://sitebuilder.yola.com/sites/S3/...

I have been adding my own graphics etc to make it more modern.
Please tell me what you think.
Please be honest so i can improve it further.

Many Thanks
John Mc

John McCarthy

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Posted 8 years ago

8 years ago

c2print

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Hey John ... both are lookin good ... the New Banner Rocks ... however you got a couple of typos ... under Credits ... there should be their ... and I noticed on one spot it should read Your Finds ... not You Finds.

other than that ... I say go for it ... looks like you are having fun with it.

cheers

www.WitchPrint.com

2010-06-15T19:37:38+00:00

John McCarthy

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Thanks for spotting the typos,ive had a stressful few weeks with exams at school.I will fix these tommorow :)

8 years ago

Laura Thomas, Social Media Coordinator

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Hi John Mc,

Wow, what a great resource, thanks for putting this together. The overall design really is eye catching!

I wanted to click the "Latest" "Notice" and "Credit" squares because they looked so much like buttons to me. Will you be making those clickable down the road?

One fresh eyes read through (after you've recovered from exams!) will help you to clean up all the copy. Things like missing apostrophes and confusing "there" for "their" will be an easy fix after you've had some sleep. Also adding one or two spaces after each period to fix the spacing.

I'm excited to watch this site evolve and to point users to it as a reference!

2010-06-15T21:05:28+00:00

John McCarthy

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Thanks for the help Laura, Only got 3 more exams so nearly done. The "Latest" etc will be eventually buttons when i make the rest of the site. Thanks for spending time to give me feedback.

2010-06-15T21:14:08+00:00

Laura Thomas, Social Media Coordinator

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Awesome, that's what I figured. I'll keep an eye on it as it develops! :0)

2010-06-15T21:16:26+00:00

John McCarthy

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Thanks Again, I will post some more developments tommorow when I get home from school :)

8 years ago

John McCarthy

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Hi Guys.
Feeling refreshed after my exams. Still got two more in the coming week so nearly done. I have published the changes so far and i would appreciate more feedback and ideas if you can think of any.
Please feel free to submit a find to the site.
Many thanks for your great help.
John Mc

www.yolafinds.yolasite.com

8 years ago

Sanja, Official Rep

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I love the colors John Mc! Very fun and eye-catching!

I look forward to seeing how you develop this website. :)

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