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I think conceptually my site is complete. Any suggestions or critique of it is welcome.
Thnaks
www.kissbarbados.com
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Craig

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Ruth

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Hi Craig,

I think you have a good concept. I like how you have incorporated a blog into your site, that will keep visitors returning. One thing I would suggest is the placement of your Google advertisements. I would place them to the side or at the bottom of the page, so that your content is more prominent.

I'm sure some of our other Yola customers will also chime in with their thoughts,
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Thanks I had difficulty with putting google ads at the side so I will take up your suggestion and move them to the bottom.
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Hi Craig

I love your banner image! Very captivating and fits in well with your sandy colored background.

I do have a few suggestions. Please only do what you feel is best though for you and your vision. =)

1. Please look at my screenshot (you can click to enlarge):


2. Kiss Products
This page is full of neat ideas.. but it's hard to read it because everything is crammed together. I would suggest putting some spaces between each product. You can do this by dragging a text widget over and hit "enter" a couple of times.



Since your page is a little long, I would encourage you to use anchor tags so that your reader can simply click on a link that says "return to top" instead of having to scroll. If you're interested in this, here's a tutorial: http://tipsandtricks.synthasite.com/A...

3. Jason Fenty
I am led to believe that this is about Jason Fenty - instead what I find is contact information and a bunch of ads. Perhaps you could rename this page to "contact info"? I would also encourage you to incorporate a contact form that you can embed into your site that way people stay on your site. My personal favourite is www.jotform.com Maybe you could put your ads on a separate page as this does not seem to have anything to do with your contact information.

A good start Craig! Please feel free to ask me for further clarification or if you need help.

If you'd like to some ideas, you can visit my sites at:
http://dejavuapparel.yolasite.com
http://littleus.yolasite.com
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Thanks very much
Jason Fenty is a graphic designer - :( should have pointed that out
I will incorporate some of your ideas
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You're very welcome Craig. I wish you every success with this venture of yours. Please don't hesitate to ask questions if needed along the way. =)