Looking for feedback on my new website

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Hi, I've been creating a new website http://tinyurl.com/lll5f4d and am looking for some feedback and ways that the site can be improved.
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alex llewellyn

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Rob White

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When I click in your link Alex, I get http://mammothvouchercodes.co.uk - is this the one you want comment on?

The banner heading is great, bold and clean.

But the rest of the page is very busy and crowded, almost confusing. There is probably just too much information on a single page. Much of the detail should be saved for the next level down rather being shown on the top page

Also, the serif type faces are really more for the printed page, san-serif fonts are crisper and look better on the screen.

Hope this helps
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Love the disqus feature! I had not seen it yet.

Banner should be more topic specific - show coupons, piles of cash, people handing vouchers, etc. Looks like a furniture store at first.

Less copy as mentioned above - Just a tease is best.

Add some pix into the listings, even if not the exact item. Or use a set of icons: 1 for clothing,1 for furniture, baby, etc.

Correct the double line space by pasting in note pad: after you have the lines formatted and broken as you like and to fit the site, paste in note pad, remove extra line spaces, re-copy, paste into a text widget, re-format size and font how you had it. Lines will be how you had them, without the double space.

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