Need feedback on design..

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ummm, first of all sorry to bother you all
but i would be really happy if you can take out some time to have a look at my website n tell me about its layout n design.
Still i haven't filled it up with articles, so many of links in menu etc wont be working :(
So check out this dummy page here: http://www.thebeautybliss.com/alpha-t...
all kind of feedback, criticism & suggestions are welcome :)
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I see the menu is working nicely and looks good. Should the slogan be: change the way the mirror sees you? Also, using "n" instead of "and" does not seem very professional and is slightly annoying. The color of the headline does not seem to match the logo or menu--it seems a bit off. And the breadcrumbs are too big. All my opinion of course. :) It looks like you have a lot of content planned which is really good. And the icons look good. Good luck with the project!
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Thanks alot for feeback Diane :)
I still need to work on the banner.. i will do that in some time,
Will surely keep in mind to keep the vocabulary professional henceforth!
Tried to match the colour. As there are limited colour in yola builder, tried adjusting menu n banner's colour a bit..
breadcrumbs made a size smaller..
And i cant believe my eyes! these small actually made a big difference!
More ideas are welcome.. :)
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Hello Monica

The menu looks awesome! Well done! I think your banner is really cute!

I'm a big proponent of having white space as it helps your visitors to read your content better. Perhaps putting a bit more white space between your menu and your content will help to serve readability.

I would also put your comments on a separate page as this could get quite lengthy.

I look forward to seeing what else you have up your sleeve! You're off to a good start!
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Thanks Sanja for taking time out and having a look at the site!
I have now increased the space between menu & main content.. Do u think i should increase it more?
About comments, i wanted readers to comment on every topic as my site mainly contains articles and i m not a professional in case of writing!
Is there any alternative so my reader can tell me about individual page, without increase the length of the page?
Thanks alot once again for suggestions :)
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Hi Monica

That looks much better!

Hmm.. perhaps you may want to use more of a chat box? One example can be found here: http://yolatestsite.yolasite.com