Please look at my site and tell me what you think!!!!Any comments would be appreciated

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If anyone would like me to visit there site please let me know and if anyone is in the bridal industry we could exchange links.Thank you to any visitors to my site
www.gypsysweddingflowers.synthasite.com
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Hi Rae of Hope

What an exciting venture this must be for you! You have put together a very classy site and the template you've selected really goes well with your business.

I do have a few comments to make but please keep in mind that these are only suggestions. You have to do what is right for you and what best fits your vision and passion.

1. I noticed on your homepage you have a bunch of links that lead to other pages (e.g. Bridal bouquets & posies, wholesale prices, table centrepieces, etc..). I suggest that you make these links available on all your pages for easy access and easy navigation.

2. Using your bridal bouquet page (http://gypsysweddingflowers.synthasit...) as an example, I would move the "wedding flowers*bridal bouquets*bridesmaids bouquets*etc..." to either above the pictures or below the pictures. This helps to create less confusion in reading that space between the pictures.

Also, I noticed that bridesmaids bouquet is missing a "u" in it.

3. On your packages.php page, I believe there is something amiss with the text as they don't line up nicely under each photo. Again, I would move the "wedding flowers, bridal bouquets, etc... " to either the top or bottom of the pictures.

4. One idea that you may want to consider is making an e-mail form right on your site. You can even make order forms as well! Jotform (www.jotform.com) is a site that I recommend you check out. They have a lot of options for making various forms, including order forms. They are a free service.

5. These last two suggestions I have are merely cosmetic. It might be nice if you added color to your text - to really help pop out your site. I noticed you've done this with your links and they look nice. The grey I find a bit hard to read but it does give a nice understated feeling to your site. It really depends on what you like! =)

The other suggestion I have is in regards to your images and text. I would place the price and the code together instead of apart - this way all the information is together. May I recommend that you look at this thread I just made today about putting images in a table grid? It may really suit your purpose. http://getsatisfaction.com/yola/topic...

You have done a great job of putting it all together. If you need any clarification or help, please don't hesitate to ask. I wish you every success!
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Hi Littleus
These comments are going to be so helpful. It will take me a bit of time to execute these. I really appreciate your response.
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Hi Littleus
Thank you so much for all your help
I have done your recommended changes and my site looks so much better, I am going to work on the order form and the table grid
Thank you so much
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Soo pretty, only 1 thing that has been mentioned by LU, the grey font. But, again so pretty and I do love the template goes so well, imho!
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Lily

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Hi Rizan22. Thank you so much for your comments. I love your site,
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Yola_User_A

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Hi Gypsy, I think your site is nice, do you like the banner's flower image?...
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Lily

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Hi A, do you mean the banner flower on my site or are you talking about another image, if its the one on my site I love it, however I dont even know what type of flower it is
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Yola_User_A

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Yeah that one... Oh ok, it looks like some type of underwater/sea flower to me, wasn't sure if you knew that...
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Great site! Littleus has given you some great tips.

The only suggestion I would add is that you consider uploading your own banner image. Perhaps one of your own bridal bouquets? This will help personalize your site and make it stand out from anyone else who uses that style.

I hope there are some other owners of bridal sites who will exchange links with you!
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Yola_User_A

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OH GOOD... Thanks Monique, couldn't have said it any better myself!... LOL
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Nice Image! But I notice for the lower pictures, thier pricing script need to be centered and the picture and it's script should be divided with a line or space I think.
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Thank you so much Ken for looking at my site and your comments
I will rectify asap
Kind Regards
Gypsy
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It often takes an outside view to see the true picture, because we what to see it as we intended it to be, which is not always the real thing. Even taking a break from the task for a few moments will let you see things that you did not see while there the first time. i see little mistakes in my pages many times that I overlooked before several times as I was building after going back to them.
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Hi Gypsy!

Your site has already improved so much! It looks cleaner and more professional looking.

I like the borders around the images. I would encourage you to apply this to all your images. I believe on your "packages" page, those images do not have the border.

Also, you still need to fix the spelling of bouquet in the phrase "bridesmaids bouqet". =)

I look forward to seeing what else you may tweak! =)
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Just beautiful! I would perhaps suggest that you get rid of the "wholesale" price on the home page...maybe have a "by request only" link for wholesale info. Really, though, a wonderful site, beautiful items, very reasonable prices. Kudos!
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Hi Blondie
Thank you so much for looking at my site.
Also thank you for your kind thoughts
Kind Regards
Gypsy
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