Review of my site? Please?

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This is my site I just completed today and I`ve only had today to create it so please no harsh comments. Also now I take requests for new pages, Also please list some improvements I could make. Here`s the link: www.homes.yolasite.com Thanks for commenting and viewing my site!!
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Laura

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  • ready for comments!! :)

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Heather

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Hi there. Looks like you did well. 2 Things. Mind you I am not good at this... lol.. just started myself. But the home page was not eye catching for me. Not sure why. Sorry. I did notice a typo on the second page. This was the line, I believe the 3rd paragraph down. Thsi is the same exact thing as with colors you need to select for a room.

Good Job!
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Ruth

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Hi Laura,

Your site looks great. Two small suggestions. I would put more on your home page, a picture or more information about the site. Something to encourage a first time visitor to click through to your other pages. I would also remove the "More pages coming" notice.

Otherwise, wonderful work!
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UK Duke, Champion

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Its a good start,

Listen to Ruth and Heather and add to the home page, remember first impressions count.

On your mix and match page i would put a bit of space between the images.

Lee.
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KanThaiDecor

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I agree, good start and I think the style you picked fits perfectly with what you are working to create. A blog for your site would benefit you greatly IMO.
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Laura

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Okay, I updated it a little now how does it look?
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UK Duke, Champion

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looking good Laura,

You need to add a bit more text to the home page and also fill in the keywords and window title fields.

Have a read over this it explains everything well.
http://www.yola.com/tutorials/plannin...

Also add a bit of space between the home page images - it will look much better.

Lee.
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Laura

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Oh, I did not notice the pictures on the front page because it looks so different on Yola. Also I will do all these things tomorrow, And hopefully after that it will look almost perfect :D Thanks!