website feedback: proof read?

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website feedback negative/positive:

Hello everyone,

this is my first time on yola forum, the first question I have is if people can review my website and let me know where I would need to improve, I know will need to improve on spelling errors, could someone be able to proof read and give me a re- written idea.
www.jacobspersonalchefservices.com

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Jacob
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Hello Jacob,

You have a great site there, well done! However, as you said, there are a few things that could be touched upon.

In your photo gallery, you use horizontal scrolling. This is usually frowned upon, as vertical scrolling is much easier, and display's much better. Also, whilst some of your images are pixellated and too big, they are all different sizes. Making them the same size would make it look even better!

Also, there's a rather large spelling issue in your banner on the Forum page. Nutritional isn't spelt 'Nutritioninal', it is spelt 'Nutritional'.'

All in all, it's looking very nice.
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wow thank's for the quick response awsome, will do
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JC

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Hi there Jacob, well done, hope you don't mind me saying a few things, which hopefully will assist. As you have done very nicely and it looks very understandable, clear and easy to navigate.
Agree with Jim on Photo gallery and image size and the 'pixel' problem with some of the images. as they need to be clearer. 'Spellings' but know you said you were doing these - a couple of extra things on first page -
pgh under that "Chefs Note; When selection a event ensure " should that not be 'when selecting an event ?
Meal planning: "two weeks (10) days " possibly I am being slightly 'picky' but the two weeks? if it is 10 days, should only say 10 days not 2 wks ?
Feel the Contact page, shld have the contact form on not on a separate page ie Form.
Could the 'picture gallery' page be named something else, as it relates more to your food, and then the 'reviews' page changed to something like 'events' and then add your out and about participation in shows etc onto that events page also?
Hope this is something on what you were after, Looks good, and await your finished version.
J
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Wow again thank you for your responses so quick, I belong to personal chef associations but never this quick this is great, will keep you posted with the progress of my site, may need your assistance again as I would like to do a cooking class on you tub and some how post that on my site will see. first thing to get current site more professional and good grammer
thank you
Jacob